by Vanessa Lea Mar 13, 2006
category :
Life, society /
other
You can just look at me |
by Brooke Amity
I need you to help me feel like this. |
Not too bad...Not as good as the other two, but every poet has poems like these sometimes. You can always feel emotion in your poem, and even though I didn't like it, I'm going to give it a 5.5 because you could feel the emotion which is always great. |
by Darien
Being you is the best thing you could do. Everyone is unique, lets keep it that way. Nice poem, really well thoughout. Keep on writing! |
by PS
Ah the lesson i learned. awesome content. |
by Kaylee
I'll hold myself together, not shatter |