Comments : Do I Want It?

  • 18 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Superb write Matt... The words are touching and written from the heart. The care and love shine through. A beautifully written number my friend :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Luke

    Good poem, with a good flow to it.. I can see an improvement in your poems, as more and more poems are developed.

    Keep it up.

  • 18 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    Hey i remember that phone call ya you were at your moms house and it was on saturday of lsat week and it was bout 8:30 that we were talking bout that!! ha im wierd i remember that ha neways love you babe!!!!
    ainz

  • 18 years ago

    by AinsleySara

    Hmm thinking i'm going to write new comments on all of your poems as your ex-girlfriend! lol ok hmm this poem is good and it would be easier to comment on if it wasn't written bout me and i love it! it always scared me wheny ous aid you didn't want to matter because i wanted you to have what you wanted and i could never ever make you not matter to me and you still matter to me!
    Ainz