Comments : The Perfect Kiss: Second Version

  • 20 years ago

    by ~* Joyful *~

    Hey this is just as good as the original... You got a talent.. keep it up!!!

  • 20 years ago

    by Ashley Todd

    hey that was a really good poem. . you put alot into it and whoever you are talking about is really loved by you. . your a great writer! i'm gonna go read more of your stuff. . chow! great job!