Your good i likes this one!

Wow...thats very deep an emotional...i hope you dont feel this way....like u said to me if you ever wanna talk email me or sumthing an we can....very great poem by the way...

~!Sandra!~

This is awesome!!! its amazing how one night can suck so bad that all u can do is scream or write poetry!! great job!
Amanda

Wow, brilliant piece of writing :-) Very emotional and flows well. Here to talk if you want. Keep up the great work you are very talented! 5/5 x-x-x

Excellent once again! But i must say...If there was so many people that you had to write to, why bother with suicide?
~Nav
~A new but honest friend

That was really deep, I feel I know the exact emotions and actions related and how everything forms on the page... as if i was there watching overhead

YOU ARE A VERY TALENTED WRITER.....I LOVED IT..THANX FOR THE COMMENT ON MINE.

Thanks for your comment.x