Beautiful imagery and just astounding emotion.
I love these lines:

"caught within the corner
of a place wrapped in confusion"

"beating against the solitude of peace"

"a quite slumber is left to breath."

Great stuff as always! Love ya~Holly

Wonderfully written, Jeannie! i just loved every line, every word in this. the imagery you evoke is so overpowering!

great work on this one!

love and peace
shobhana

Even though i dont know what some of these big words mean i think its lovely
5/5

This reminded me of love. :| lol

Comment #5:
WOW! WOW! WOW! I have such a hard time writing about nature, but you did an exellent job on this....I'm just so afraid that with how much I praise your work you're just going to start thinking that I'm just saying it to be nice, but really...you are VERY talented. I loved the lines:
Slowly it grows
invading the silence
parting it's depths with despair
and reaching the crescendo of rage.
These lines almost make it sound graceful...and yet they convey a feeling of anger. Once again, great job. 5/5 as always! :)
~Midnight Sun