Cradle every silver tear

by Lady Vengeance   Mar 13, 2006


Cradle every silver tear
In velvet midnights arms
And give a frosty winter's kiss
To those who've caused you harm

Hide your face behind your hands
As clouds cover the sky
Then be the friend they never were
For each and every lie

Golden leaves slip off the trees
As you fall to the floor
Forgive the ones who beat you down
You won't hurt anymore

Children's fears are elders' friends
Now time's erased the pain
Hated once, they now have changed
And finally, it rains.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Should "midnights" be "midnight's"?

    I really like the last stanza a lot. Especially the last line.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Cradle every silver tear
    In velvet midnights arms
    And give a frosty winter's kiss
    To those who've caused you harm

    ^^^I really like that part. Especially that last two lines.
    This is a very good poem. When I read the title, I didn't think I was going to understand it. But I really did. It is excellent. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Beautiful! the images were so wonderful! it was very well written, and as usual it flowed just perfectly. you should be proud

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow the ways you look at a poem....
    sorry crappy poem quickness, damn
    um excellence and you thought it wasnt that good
    shame on you suzie,
    lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Exactly!!!! score!!! it was supposed to invoke relief and serenity after a long period of stress and cruelness. awesome!

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