Comments : Cradle every silver tear

  • 18 years ago

    by VioletRaven

    This is a beautifuly descriptive poem, with deeply insightful observations, very well done.
    Highest Praises,
    *VioletRaven*

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wow. I loved this poem! So beautiful. Amazing. I'm impressed! I loved the last phrase, it was so refreshing. "and finally it rains' Felt like a relief. Well done =) Loved every part of it =) Love you -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by Lady Vengeance

    Exactly!!!! score!!! it was supposed to invoke relief and serenity after a long period of stress and cruelness. awesome!

  • 18 years ago

    by Wings Of Flames

    Wow the ways you look at a poem....
    sorry crappy poem quickness, damn
    um excellence and you thought it wasnt that good
    shame on you suzie,
    lol

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    Beautiful! the images were so wonderful! it was very well written, and as usual it flowed just perfectly. you should be proud

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by Jackie Marie

    Cradle every silver tear
    In velvet midnights arms
    And give a frosty winter's kiss
    To those who've caused you harm

    ^^^I really like that part. Especially that last two lines.
    This is a very good poem. When I read the title, I didn't think I was going to understand it. But I really did. It is excellent. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Melissa S. Masucci

    Should "midnights" be "midnight's"?

    I really like the last stanza a lot. Especially the last line.