Shadow

by Purple   Mar 13, 2006


Like talking to a dark shadow in a dream
Distant, wise, dark
It stands alone
Unkown
Flowing with knoledge
That can't be held by a living mortal

It visits to help, to tell
Some thing once unknown
vage, or exact,
the being it's self stays a mysery
Uncomprehendable in all ways
it's form is unseen
non-existent, made up of nothing
and everything

It says what can't be known
but must be

Existing to disapear
Apearing to exist
Never whole but always complete
It's mass never stops increasing

Out of reach
but there, always there
It's silent untill the last momment
it's prime and needed momment

Like a shadow in an almost forgotten dream
It waits

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Wasn't sure to how to brake this up into lines or stanzas, it was orginally written in paragraph form, I don't think I even ment it to be a poem.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    This was really good. Keep up the good work. 5/5
    xoxoxox
    Jess

  • 18 years ago

    by Sorefromreality

    That was rlly good and i think poets hav such a better outlook on how things rlly are...i like the way u use repetition but still keep it simple in a way that makes people think into deeper meaning....nice job and i rlly like the poem, grrt writing, keep up the awesome work! thx for ur comment,
    love ya lots
    sore

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Well if it wasn't meant to be a poem, it sure made a great accidental one. I wouldn't worry about the breaking up of lines, this way works. There's never really a great way to break up the lines of an unrhymed poem. Infact, it's something I can't do so well hehe. Anyway, it's a really great poem. I'm glad I got the chance to read it. My favourite lines were:
    it's form is unseen
    non-existent, made up of nothing
    and everything.

    Keep it up! :)

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