Good write, the second stanza was nicely done especially. I think 'Stale' would be a more suiting title than 'This Morning I Woke Up,' since the theme of the poem seems to be the realization of the ordinaryness (is that a word? I really don't know) of your life without the person you speak to in the poem.

By the way, I noticed the mistakes in 'I Stand' and fixed them. Apparently, the site's spell checker did that without me noticing. The final stanza was different than the others because that's how it flowed when I was writing it, not sure why other than that. Thanks for the thoughtful comments, though.

-DJ

Hey hun, thanks for the honest comments. Heh, it was funny that you picked one of my worst poems to read, lol, but thank you for commenting anyway. I know it needed a bit of work, but I was also feeling lazy at the time of writing it. I apreciate your words of wisdom love, and btw your picture is amazing; you are gorgeous! I liked this poem, it was very interesting. I agree with you in the fact that it is very hard to name. I don't know if I quite like stale as a title, but I am at a loss for a better one. Sorry am not much help. Thanks again love.

-Tainted Mikochan

Powerful, and short.. its very good.. but i think you could probably take this poem a little farther.. perhaps to a story like setting?
~David
P.s ...sorry to be getting back to you so late.

Short, but interesting, it's good ^^

You really have a way with writing poems - it really brings the reader into it (or maybe it's just me) So much power in so few lines :)

Peace. [Sole]

What you've written is great, might do with being a little longer - like a greater description of the scene?
Still love it though

Amazing and beautiful.

i like this line
"The bird of dawn was looking queer"

I really like this poem. As I said on 'Clap', it's very modern, but I definitely like this one.

You use very interesting metaphors and personification. A great style, really, even if it's not what I would normally prefer. xD

I think you should extend it, but beyond that its amazing....

[lostlaureate- come find me]

Wow that is such a beautiful poem.. its very short but you did a great job on describing everything. I really liked it.
oh & btw...two of the poems you requested..i have already r/r/c on. so I am doing two others in it's place, hope you don't mind...but anyways.. you did a really good job on this poem! Keep it up!