My Advice

by eric   Mar 13, 2006


To love too much
is there even such a thing
some people spend
there whole lives searching

love is the hardest thing to find
but when to get it
it'll be on the top of your mind
and you will never forget it

i believe if you just leave your mind free
what is meant to happen, will eventually be

love can make you depressed and mentally ill
it can make you try
to kill yourself with numourus pills

sure for love theres ups and downs
but for exed loved ones
theres below and above the ground

its your choice what you choose to do
but my advice is dont let it control you
its amazing what one girl can put you through

people love you more then you know
even if its the kind of love
that they'll never show

you dont have to take my advice
and you dont have to listen to this
but one thing i promise you
if you take your life you be missed

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  • 18 years ago

    by eric

    Haha holly thats why i wrote it. i remember our past and thats not gonna change me and you both went through the same stuff and i'll never forget it. we had some good times together darling :)

  • 18 years ago

    by ~XOHOLLYOX~

    Exactly how i feel..and that i fear...very well done eric, very real, puts memories into my mind