With this I shall...

by Sorefromreality   Mar 13, 2006


U make my life so difficult
u force me to tears
even when i am unafraid
u bring back all my fears

with this knife i shall end
ur infinite hurt and pain
i will rid myself of you
u will die in vain

with this pen i shall scrall
my suicide note i will write
about all my insecurities
and the neverending fights

with this rope i shall murder myself
destroy my useless life
not until i have been strangled
will i no longer feel strife

and with this poem i shall explain
why i did it all
b/c u pushed and shoved me
till i was forced to fall

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  • 18 years ago

    by Tripp

    Emotional pain...so much worse than any physical pain. trust me, ive played football for 3 years, and have been boxing for 2 haha. it may sound sadistic, but poems about 'ending peoples lives' always sound good to me...but i dont know. its also the fact that all your poems are insanely good

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    This is a very well written and constructed peome. well written with good prgression and a perfectly smooth flow.

    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Void

    Hey Sore, Thankyou so much for all of your comments- I love hearing from you. I felt it was about time I came back to see your poems, and I'm glad I did because I haven't read this one yet. Now that I have, I can see that your still growing more as a writer - I love how much each and every one of us has improved, especially you. The flow was constant, and flawless, hats off to you on that one good friend. It sort of scares me though, as in this one poem you have written about two different ways of harming yourself (I don't know if you really do have these thoughts or not, but I sure hope you're alright, you know I'm always here for you.) Keep writing :)

  • 18 years ago

    by VYXSIN

    Kool poems 5/5

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