X Pyromaniac Mind

by Sole   Mar 13, 2006


My heart is bleeding
So I turn to subtle knife
Soul unbelieving
Don't have the guts to take my life
And I turn to pain
Cannot bear to feel this way
Tears in eyes again
As the candle burns, I lay
My body shaking
Head in hands I lay and cry
Then my mind awakens
To the pain, I want to die
At first it burns
Then
The pain starts to dissappear
And my mind returns
To the reason I am here
Pyromaniac mind
And heartless soul
Now I find
I should take my life after all.

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  • 18 years ago

    by LostHopesCrimsonTears

    Its not bad, but Im not feeling this one like I have many others of yours, in short, its really not your best work

  • 18 years ago

    by No Need For A Name

    Its ok it seems it needs to be built moreso.

  • 18 years ago

    by Synh

    Hmmm.... I dont see why you have a pyromaniac mind? Are you in love with fire or something? I dont really understand that part. But i really enjoyed how you pieced the words together in such a way that you did. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by DavidBrendan

    Vivid imagery and a complete story out of a short poem, 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Sad, but well written, enjoyed it
    love Tara-Kay

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