Very touching, the last stanza is very well-said. Again the flow is excellent.

Was an o.k. poem not one of your best but was still good. the beginning was a little confusing and I didn't think it really agreed with the ending but I still liked it.

~Retniapdoolb~

Awwww how sad. First, while I remember let me say I think you have your tenses wrong on the third line...I think it should be found, however to keep your rhyme in order I think you could get around that by making it "now I find."
This was a very touching piece, and the final stanza made my heart sink. You really write with so much feeling, enough to make me want to cry!
Very well done.

The last line might sound better as couldn't
apart from that....aww

Its short but well written and i liked it
xxxx

Yay didn't comment on this one yet! Ever think of enerting any of your poems in a contest? You should. The last line, was my favorite.

Ooo very nice

The last line --> so beautiful lol
Very sad poem though but so well written , good job :)

~StefQ

I liked the first stanza, it flowed good. I didn't like the 2nd and 3rd stanza as much the flow was off because of the wording. Other then that there is nothing wrong with it. I gave it a 5/5