Lost

by VYXSIN   Mar 13, 2006


Lost in a world
hurrying to pass by
i just lay here
hoping to die

lost in a world
where everythings untrue
stuck in this hell hole
all cause of you

lost in a world
this horrible dream
all this sh!!
makes me want to scream

lost in a world
still nothings alright
going on with life
putting up another fight

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  • 16 years ago

    by BROKEN ANGEL

    I sooooooooooo lived it ..i fell exactly the same way ..i want to read it more ..and your right this world is so untrue and everyone in it... keep up the good work

  • 17 years ago

    by Robert

    The hook in the piece was there but with little to no background about this world the reader would ask why should I care. So tell me why should the reader care to read anything about you being lost in a world they can not either see or understand Plot121.

  • 18 years ago

    by Darien

    Title this poem "Lost in a World"
    it seems more original, and it follows your poem. Good stuff, I enjoyed reading it.

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Well good peice, it isa well written and flows well

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Hey girl, loved it... I can relate...

    ::MELI::

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