Hey girl, loved it... I can relate...

::MELI::

Well good peice, it isa well written and flows well

Title this poem "Lost in a World"
it seems more original, and it follows your poem. Good stuff, I enjoyed reading it.

The hook in the piece was there but with little to no background about this world the reader would ask why should I care. So tell me why should the reader care to read anything about you being lost in a world they can not either see or understand Plot121.

I sooooooooooo lived it ..i fell exactly the same way ..i want to read it more ..and your right this world is so untrue and everyone in it... keep up the good work