Everytime

by unknown0208   Mar 13, 2006


Every time i see your face my heart begins to race. i love you with all my heart,but i know with you thats not the case.all you do is lie and cheat,and i still continue to worship your feet.i still continue to take the shit from you.it only has to be cause i love you.i don't know how to express my feelings anymore.i feel like I'm going to explode inside.i just want to run some where and hide. i just feel like apart of me has died.but at least i can say is i tried before i finally had to say goodbye.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jon Hunt

    Stanzas are nice, but i think its suited just as well without them, it expresses the emotion better, as though it were all to burst out rather than stream into a structure.

    I enjoyed this greatly. Pure Emotion

    Jon

  • 18 years ago

    by LadyPearl

    Wonderful flow and expression. It would be better if you put stanzas in. Keep it up