This is awesome!! Incredible! I love this so, so much!

all the best,
Mary

Awesome sauce Ms. Sondos, I love it when someone uses a wide range of vocabulary, most people use the simplest words. Good write mademoiselle.

Your poems are such a joy to read - though they can sometimes take reading a few times to fully understand them. Your style, rhyming (or not) and general wording of the poems are genious :)

Peace. [Sole]

Interesting sentiments and catchy thoughts. The 3rd stanza sounds outre.
My favourite line is
In a slumbering rhythm the city falls

I'll have toa gree that you're one of the most talented 14 year old writers I have ever seen or maybe you haven't updated your age. Either way, it's great to see some fresh talent here!!!!!

I thought there was some excellent symbolism in this poem, along with good description. Defying the laws of mathematics, the two coupled make five somehow! Lol, good job.

I'd just like to thank you all for your comments and verify that flattering as it is to be considered talented I am still 14 and won't be 15 until February 2007. Thanks All

Sondos

Wow you have an intence vocabulary for someone so young! You have talant

Lots of love and peace
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Wow you have an intence vocabulary for someone so young! You have talant

Lots of love and peace
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Gr8 work sondos. keep writing such gr8 stuffs. i am sure you ll be on the homepage someday. love, bhavin.

This is a really good poem. The imagery in this was amazing & I love the way that you ended it. You had a great word choice on this.. 5/5*

Very...how do you put it,..visual that it awakens my senses..

By the way, creative title

I'm reading all your old stuff because you NEED TO WRITE SOMETHING NEW. i miss your poetry. it's one of the only few i like even whether it's crap or not. not that your poetry is crap. i just like the weird rhymes and big words. :]! so go on and write something JUST FOR ME. and i love your titles. KAY i'm done ranting.
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