When Darkness Falls

by Cuddles   Mar 13, 2006


So long as the sun shines
I'll smile and pretend everything is fine.
I'll laugh up into your face
and in your company I'll feel safe.
So long as daylight stands
my heart will sing and my soul will dance.
In your arms I'll have no fear.
I will not shed one single tear.

But in a few hours darkness will fall.
The trees will bend and the wind will howl.
I'll curl up in a corner, lonely and scared,
crying and wishing that you were there.
My mind will swirl with horrifying things
while I wait for daylight to come again.
But for then I'll be on my own.
When darkness falls I'll be all alone.

(c) Mary Barren

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  • 18 years ago

    by Bogie

    Dang!!! Girl, Its like heaven and hell,
    good and bad, hot and cold, love and
    hate, living day and night in lifes ups
    and downs.

    The flow and rhyme through the write
    were outstanding Cuddles. This is the
    first poem I have read of yours and I
    am not stopping here. Excellent read
    indeed,
    Bogie

  • 18 years ago

    by innocentcrybaby

    Hey cuddles..thats a sad poem but i loved it...it makes you wanna cry at the end...especially a crybaby like me...great poem...

    Innocent Crybaby*

  • 18 years ago

    by beautyinainstant

    Wow thanks but honestly ur comment made me smile...ya i know my flow isnt that good how could i make it better? ~valerie

  • 18 years ago

    by beautyinainstant

    I have read a couple of ur poems and from what i have read u r jus a freaking talented person keep it up no matter what happens!check out some of mine and if u have any suggestions then plz tell me i know i could learn a lot fomr u! ~valerie

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
    great theme and just loved it dear!

    keep writing!
    Bharti

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