Wondeful penn Mary, exquisitely done, great work!!!

This is beautiful and sad!
"The trees will bend and the wind will howl"
^^^ Love this line! Wonderful write! ;o)

I like this...it has a wintry feel to it. I can see the trees bending and it works for me. well done

Imagery is great... I enjoyed the read a lot... A superb write Mary :)

Hey, Great job once again. Love the title. You always do an awesome job. Keep it up.

Luv
Michelle

Another great poem by u, really liked the theme. very nicely expressed

all the best and take care

BEAUTIFUL!!!!!
great theme and just loved it dear!

keep writing!
Bharti

I have read a couple of ur poems and from what i have read u r jus a freaking talented person keep it up no matter what happens!check out some of mine and if u have any suggestions then plz tell me i know i could learn a lot fomr u! ~valerie

Wow thanks but honestly ur comment made me smile...ya i know my flow isnt that good how could i make it better? ~valerie

Hey cuddles..thats a sad poem but i loved it...it makes you wanna cry at the end...especially a crybaby like me...great poem...

Innocent Crybaby*

Dang!!! Girl, Its like heaven and hell,
good and bad, hot and cold, love and
hate, living day and night in lifes ups
and downs.

The flow and rhyme through the write
were outstanding Cuddles. This is the
first poem I have read of yours and I
am not stopping here. Excellent read
indeed,
Bogie