A new path

by just a poet   Mar 13, 2006


A whisper in the wind
blows through my hair
tugging at the stray ends
chasing away every care

Every Care of Stress
It all just goes away
Im no more a mess
A new Person Today

forgetting the past,
my pain left behind,
learning to ajust,
learning to move on.

life wasn't always good for me,
I had days when i felt i couldnt win,
But now I know what i want to be,
and a whole new life I will begin

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  • 18 years ago

    by Avrii Monrielle

    Beautiful.

    "chapstick" was an entry for a contest. I wasn't sure which category either... lol

  • 18 years ago

    by Fighter (Ariane L.)

    :D great poem hun!

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    Hey no name lol ul hav 2 tell me ur name so I don't keep calling you no name lol.... GREAT POEM!!!! It was simple, short and sweet! I really enjoyed it! hey with the club just get in there and have fun and ask 4 help and get involved in the contests!!! they're AWESOME infact if I hadn't already nominated some1 I'd hav nominated u so yea lol great 2 hav ya! *hugs* Ruthie

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Hey girl with no name, that comment you left me was the longest comment I have ever gotten on here. Wow... thanks for all the kind words you offered me. You dont know what they meant to me. Well I am not even gonna try to write a long commetn like you did... I guess I understand what you mean about not being alone... but it feels like that sometimes... like no one can understand and I kno that if you knew all the little secrets behind this poem... u might not understand either.I would love it if we kept in touch... do you yahoo? I got Hotmail too and Aim watever u got ..lol let me know. THnaks for our help. And well now to your poem...lol Well I thought it was a very touchin piece... i love the poetic words you put together here. I love it. I really do... I gave it a 5. Keep writting I like your style. Thanks girl. Maybe I'll find out your name one day... for now Mines Is Melissa. Ttulz then...bye

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Wonderful. "a whole new life I will begin" Really echoes in my head. Nice written. Loved it a lot! Well done =) Lotsaa love -xxx-