Wow this is strong poem. Left me speechless. Wonderful. Loved every part of it! Well done. Lotsaa love -xxx-

Excellent poem, It had a really good flow.. Keep up the great work!
5/5 Bec xx

Ps. Thanx heaps 4 commenting on my work.xx.

Ah haha u evil ho.... i wont have his kids n hes not da love of my life hes just mr rite now..... anyways i commented on this before and dont no wot i said now..... evil thing!!! oh well hows dazza??

That was a great poem, wonderful, awesome, what else can i say
plz check out my new poem impulse

I like this one...5/5

Mallori