Hey that was great. i think thats how i feel sometimes. like no one knows the real me, the person inside of me that wants to come out but i dont let it. thats cool how we relate.

WOW!!! this one was excellent i loved it...good job n kep it up!

I really like this poem especially since I can relate to it. Good Job

I really like ur poem and i would like to thank u for commenting on mine
stephie

Hey I like this poem!! Well done!! And thnx for the comment on mine!!

This is a rly gr8 poem. it shows lots of feeling. uv got talent! keep writing!
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Really good, i know how you feel 5/5

Hey thats a great poem. i loved it. great writing keep it up.
much love
ashley

Once again i can relate... a very good poem! 5
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Well, alot of people may not understand you you really are, but been there and done that, to say the least. you are definately on my favorites list. talk to you later. well done.

I can totally relate to that! really good job!

Deep. captures the secrecy of the persona well. the line length is good, starting long, shortening then lengthening again adds to the idea of concealment. though the line 'keeping everything hidden in the inside.' might work better without the 'in the' at the end. jus a thought im probably wrong.
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Oooo I liked this one! It was good and i can relate. nice job buddy :)

I can relate to this poem.. I think it was great.. but in the same way, depressing.

Well done :)

Very dark, Very sad, usually very true. Wish life wasnt as hard as it truly is.

My hopes and dreams are all gone
but is this what I wanted all along?
then I realize that i cry
and my eyes
they are full of tears
but theres no one to hear.

Know exactly how that feels. and that part of the poem is what made me give you 5/5. Great Job.

Yours Truly
Bryce

Wow. I really loved the poem 5/5
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Very deep! Alot of people can relate to it. I like how you varied your rhyme sequences. It was a great read. Keep writing!

I love this poem. it's exactly how i feel. great job! please keep it up! and thanks for the comment on mine.

Wow that was really good. It gave me the sivers. It was like you read into my soul. I loved it!

This is a good poem