Good poem.

Your kiss
its amazing
when u kiss me
i feel like i am
on top of the
world.

That right thee is redundant we alread know he's kissed you so if you just say...when u kiss me I feel like i am on top of the world, that sounds better. Or well to me. No poet is perfect and critism will only make u better taske this nad learn form it dear.

Good poem! Keep it up, nice prospective.

Lissa

Very nice wording, cool intimacy

Brilliant poem. Well structured. 5/5

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