Keep On Living

by Laura   Mar 13, 2006


Under the spell you cast
Each moment was a blast
Now happy times have past
Our memories will always last

Now you are gone
I must carry on
Only by being strong
Alone after so long

With each new day
I try to find a way
To keep on living
In a world unforgiving

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  • 18 years ago

    by Fallen Angel

    Short and to the point and no less powerful for it. Emotional and evocative, beautiful 5/5 x

  • 18 years ago

    by Bridgette

    This is really good.. especially for such a short poem. You did a great job on this. I can definitely relate to this. Great job! 5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by Eibutsina

    Short but strong, direct...and somewhat intense...great poem hun keep it up :O)
    PS: Thanks for your comment!
    Risa

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Wonderful write Laura..... although a relationship has ended and it brings forth pain this write gives the message of a very postive and hopeful outlook for the future. Keep on writing......

  • 18 years ago

    by lilia

    That was wonderful... i loved the flow of the poem it worked very well. 5/5

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