You Say You Notice

by Lady in Red   Mar 13, 2006


You say you notice
The way I cut my hair
I stand there and smile
As if you really care

You said I notice
That fake smile
And I know when it is real
You say I know exactly how you feel

I shake my head once again
I'm just another girl
I want to be more
Then just your friend

You say you notice
My broken heart
And the way the light from my eyes
Had gone with the the broken parts

I sit there wishing
That you would see
That she's not what you want
And I'm screaming "It's not me"

You never saw me that way
And yet you say you did
It's just another day
Of me pretending to not be a kid

But you still say you notice
and yet you still pretend
That you don't notice
I want to be more than friends

And you say you notice
My eyes reflect my broken heart
You say I know how you feel
What it's like to be torn apart

But did you notice that he didn't break my heart...You did and I'm glad you noticed that it's torn apart......

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Awwwwww that is sooooo Sad..
    thts like wow..
    Great job expressing and writing
    Amazing..your gonna go far with this
    Just keep it up your work
    and dedication
    we could use poets like u
    Great job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~