California Love

by aDORKable x3   Mar 14, 2006


Talking all night
With you on the phone
Telling me you love me
And that I`ll never be alone

Holding onto me tightly
As if I were the last thing there
Hoping and praying that just this once
We`ll be the perfect pair

Dreaming of you
Until I awake
Seeing you face
Makes my knees quake

Feeling your arms
Around my waist
Kissing me lovingly
With your welcoming embrace

California, here we come
Wondering if it`s right
Knowing that in 2011
We`ll still be tight

Loving you is easy
How could I stop
That, dear boy
Is something even you can`t top

**It`s not my best, but I don`t care...lol...x.X**

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  • 18 years ago

    by JeaninaMorgan

    This is a fair poem i i like it short and sweet, i just didn't like how some of the parts in them like lines 4 and 5 didn't ryme maybe they seem like they ryme but not to me i read it twice! all around i think this is a 4/5! good job! you are very talented keep up the good work! check some of my poems i will appricated very much!
    ღSweet♥♥Jeaninaღ

  • 18 years ago

    by dora

    Hey darl a great use 0f w0rds in this. very well written. thank u heaps f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me! =)

    l0ts 0f l0ve
    d0ra

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Nice Expression

    especially the knees quake part..
    Great Imagery..
    thats what a poem needs
    great job
    5/5
    ~TPOMH~

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