Nice Expression

especially the knees quake part..
Great Imagery..
thats what a poem needs
great job
5/5
~TPOMH~

Hey darl a great use 0f w0rds in this. very well written. thank u heaps f0r the c0mment 0n my p0em. meant al0t t0 me! =)

l0ts 0f l0ve
d0ra

This is a fair poem i i like it short and sweet, i just didn't like how some of the parts in them like lines 4 and 5 didn't ryme maybe they seem like they ryme but not to me i read it twice! all around i think this is a 4/5! good job! you are very talented keep up the good work! check some of my poems i will appricated very much!
ღSweet♥♥Jeaninaღ