Your Eyes

by Rachel leigh   Mar 14, 2006


I can see your emotions with just one look,
By looking into your deep brown eyes.
I can tell when you're happy or upset,
They can tell me of no lies.

I can tell when you're happy,
Because your eyes are bright.
They give off so much cheer,
Just like the sunshine's light..

I can tell when you're excited,
Because your eyes get really big,
It's the same look as a cake
Seen by a little kid.

But I can tell when you are upset,
Because I look into your eyes and I see pain,
It kills me too look at you,
Because I can't help but feel the same.

So please just talk to me,
And please don't tell me lies,
Because I can see the truth,
By looking into your eyes.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Anna

    Awwww! Sweetie! That was great! Great job!

    Thank you for the comment. But I have to say one thing....I wish Jennifer understood how much I care about her because she is my best friend. But anyways...yeah. So how are you doing? I hope ok!!! I'm sure you'll find a friend! I've known Jenny almost a year now...and we met on here! lol...so I'm sure you'll find a friend...but remember, if you ever need to talk, I'm hear! I hope you feel better!

    You're an awesome person and writer, and I hope you find everything in life that you need! You've been a great friend to me...as long as I've known you, so thank you!

    Ok, well, I think this comment is getting a little too long...so I'm gonna end it. This is an awesome poem, you're a great writer! KEEP IT UP! I'm glad to have a friend like you! Keep up the great work! I can't wait to read more!!!!!!