Out of Control

by The Poetic Child   Mar 14, 2006


Inch after Inch
I try to move forward
but what it really is
is pain, I'm moving toward....

I try and i try
To let you really see
That only guy who will love you
Really is only me

I'm the only Guy
Who will stand by your side
I'm the only guy
Who will not let you hide

I stand here today
As a man to confess
That when your not on my side
it just adds so much stress

Listen i still love you
and i know you hate me
but why not give me a chance
and just..date me

you say your not beautiful
How can you let that past your lips
You are so beautiful to me
From head, to toe tips

But why did you just leave me
Leave me like i was a toy
a small little soldier
or just a a small play boy

am i not up to your standard
for a good who's such a beauty
did i say something wrong
when i called you my cutie

You are so beautiful to me
A Perfect Girl God Created
But why did you leave me
and just our heart separated

The day you came to my house
and i held you, soft yet tight
and we, made out like crazy
to show our love is right

The way i kissed your neck
and you showed me you cared
I could tell that you love me
cause you gave your heart and shared

But what happened now
All of the sudden theres hate
things i don't need
Things i don't appreciate

I always held you in my arms
those days i just miss so much
the days i held your hand
and they were gentle to the touch

I just miss you
I just want you back
but the love you had
now has to lack

and I'm left here
With nothing but a broken soul
cause without you
I'm just out of control...

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  • 18 years ago

    by Spanish Star

    Oh this was so great. I just loved it. Amazing job. Great poem. It was just so so sad. I hope your doing ok. And just remember. Some day you will find someone who appreciates you. Great job. Keep it up ;)

  • 18 years ago

    by swill

    Hi
    im just so happy that theres someone on this site who is a BOY....a real boy with a heart broken soul. so am i. everyone keeps on saying boys dont hav hearts and im like...LOOK OVER HERE!!!!!! a boy with a heart, and with words as lovely as you have used...will be happy in the long run. happy, really really happy. a girl broke my heart...in a very very bad way. i think the same thing happened to you too. its sad...but we will one day find someone whom we love...and they love us so much theyll neva let go...they'llo treat us like kings...and theyll be our queens...
    anyway lol if u can read a few of my poems n temme how they are...i'd love to know from a poet like YOU

  • 18 years ago

    by aDORKable x3

    *crying and searching for a tissue* OMG!!! that was soo sad!! *cries some more.....* Awww!! Is everything alright? ((I know it's not, but it's just a silly question...)) If ya want to talk, i'll listen...just message me if ya want!

    Here 4 ya!
    Amanda

  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Hey nice job... keep writting....

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by **Stacy**

    I can definitely relate to this poem....great writing, rhyming and use of words. i love it completely! 5/5