Caged Animal With A Blade

by Lauren Waszkiewicz   Mar 14, 2006


Caged in this dark prison
my only relief: a rusted blade
and so the memories of the beauty
and the light will forever fade

the cage I'm in, is made of your love,
your hate, your pain, and your lies
they've trapped me here forever,
my whole life and after i die

this murderous pain and suffering
it is what you've done to my soul
and its being torn apart piece by piece
it'll never again be whole

this cage of death is your love
and this wretched blade is mine
its the only pain i can cause
theres a heart beneath those lines

this razor blade opens the truth
though it seems as though only my skin
it breaks through this barren cage
and shows whats truly within.

feelings mean nothing in this prison
i am but an animal caged and forgotten
only this animal has been torn apart
and has been left cold and rotten

this razor cuts away the dead flesh
and shows whats truly there inside
but this lovely gift comes with a price
and emotions whats denied.

please let me out of this prison
i have exposed my every thought
but still I'm locked up in this prison
even though i am overwrought.

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Slightly Editted 6/22/07

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  • 17 years ago

    by ♥s|a|r|a|h♥

    Great poem! i thought that

    this razor blade opens the truth
    though it seems as though only my skin
    it breaks through this barren cage
    and shows whats truly within.

    those lines are amazing, this poem is one of the best ive read so far

    keep it up

  • 18 years ago

    by xxmichaelxx

    Thankz for participating in my contest!

  • 18 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    I liked it, not as good as your other poems I've read but it was really good none the less everything was just there, just didn't please to my taste. 4/5

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    Ohh, and thank you for the comment, I made the syllables more even.

  • 18 years ago

    by donk2ymouth

    It was interesting. I really have nothing to say, I'm not really good at commenting.

    If I must admit, the way that the lines were broken up, the complete thoughts were split, I kind of liked that although it distracted me a bit, thus cutting off the flow. It was still good though, and the imagery was great.

    Nice use of metaphors and adjectives.

    Keep up the great work.

    And my attitude has kept me going on, I don't plan on getting slaughtered by it any time soon. ahaha.