Wow that was good, so worth the wait for you to write something this good. I really like it a lot!

Ok ya i know i made a mistake.. and im sorry is all i know how say... i wish i could erase all this bull sh!+... and ive tried to listen but there is somethings were u dont seem to want to listen to me.. we have both hurt each other but in very different ways... i dont want us to end up like this... back when i barely knew who u were... i want to be one of ur best friends for a long time.. but for any of that to happen we both [me 2] need to have serious talk with no intruptions just a serious talk where we can cry and express all this bull sh!+ and explode if we have to... just to let everything out... and for ur info sorry to have to say this [but dan told me he uses u] and i dont know how i get the bi+

Aww this is an amazing poem once again. It's almost exactly what I've gone through also. I can relate so well. I hope you're alright and everythings ok. If you ever need anything you know my name. Keep up the amazing work Knoxy! Love ya!
~Love Kyra

That is good. keep writing ur a good poet and if u even have someone tell u different don't let them take u down

Hey...that was an awesome poem!! I'm so sorry this happened to u...i don't know exactly what the situation is but it must be serious for you to be so upset...so i'm very sorry!! i think you need to have a talk with this friend and just get everything out that's on your mind...if she/he doesn't listen then bail...it's not your fault they're immature!! i'm so sorry and GREAT WORK!! 5/5 comment me anytime...thanx for the comment on my poem!! :)

I have a pretty good idea who this one was about and wat and if im wrong then im wrong i love you lana! Thanks for all your help hunnie sorry if i ever hurt you!