Wow...thats suuuuuuuuuuper cute&good!

So sweet - I wouldn't say it was the best poem I had ever read. But a very cute love poem :)

Peace. [Sole]

Ooooo...this is so sweet....i bet trevor liked it a lot....I love how it rhymes!!! Poem well done

~Adriana~

Aww :p Cute poem. The rhymes are very good and the flow isn't bad. I loved this soooo keep it up :)

So cute and sweet, great work!!! loved it!

Awe thats so sweet and simple! I like the flow you had going and the rhyming was origonal! Very nicly done! I wish it was a bit longer because it was so good but sweet in simple is cool to! lol i wish my b/f's name would rhyme with stuff... lol

Sweet poem indeed. I noticed in a couple of your poems that you used "your" instead of "you're" or "you are". Just wanted to point that out. Good write though.

Awww..what a sweet little poem. Soo cute...sounds like Trevor is a lucky guy. Nicely written....you make rhyming seem so easy...teach me someday....

[lost_laureate - come find me]

Would make an adorable hallmark card hehe i loves it 5/5

It was very cute and sweet but it defintely could have been better.

Nice and sweet. very moving. some of the rhymes seemed a bit forced. i really likes some of the ideas within it.

Ruby

The sentiment is lovely and this reveals some very good imagery if you could make some of the rhyming a little more original it would improve but its very good

Sondos

Awwwww thats so cute! my b/fs names trevor n i feel ezactly like that about him! i love it!
~N ! 1< 0~