My time to go

by lucyjade   Mar 14, 2006


I looked at the mirror today
i knew straight away,
it was my day,
my time to go.
my face was pale,
as white as a ghost,
with my purple lips,
that are freezing cold,
my time to go.
i knew i'd be some where better,
where no one had ever been,
with God above ready to take me.
My time to go

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  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Lovely.........nice write

    keep writing
    and thanx 4 commenting on my poems dear!

    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by BECLiKEW0AHH

    Hey, Thanx heaps for the comment on the truth behind her tears, Yea, i wrote it becoz recently i lost my unborn baby & it was really hard. Anywho..Excellent poem, It was short but deep, & you could feel the emotion. Keep it up!
    5/5 Bec xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Amanda

    Your poems mint hunneh.
    aaaaaah cmment mine if u want.,
    keep up the good rhymes.hehehe,
    luff manda xxxx

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