by Always4You Mar 14, 2006
category :
Sadness, depression /
other
You sit there, alone |
by Darien
I was really confused by the first verse. The last line just didn't seem like a good line to end, seemed a bit incomplete. However, the rest of the poem was not effect. It was really well written. Keep writing. |
by Tara Kay
I love this poem, its just amazing, keep it up |
by La La
**write |
by La La
Woww...i think im in love with everything u want..i can relate to everything!! =) |
by LOVEmeNOT
This is good....5/5...i liked it a lot...good job |