A good write, like the new form, though it feels more could be done on it, perhaps putting in more poetic words or something. Just a suggestion.
The last stanza is well compiled.Good work.

I really liked your poem, it's something different sicne most poems I've read have 4 lines per stanza. Anyways, thanks for your comment, i didn't even realize i had spelling mistakes in my poem x.x
-kelsie

Wow the whole time I was reading this I sat here in a trance! Apparently the phone had rang and I didn't even hear it, you had me so hooked up on your wording! It was really awesome and deserves WAY more than a 5/5!

I never vote on poems that I don't understand, and I didn't understand this one. It was by no fault of yours; I'm just shallow when it comes to deciphering stuff. I'll read it in the future and try to grasp some understanding of it, at which time I will rate it.

-DJ

OH! I read it twice more and I understand it now. 5/5!

I liked it that you repeated the part of:
"Bring forth the memories you recall most excellent" that was pretty good
glad that you separated it into pieces definitly made it easier to read.

Wow! That was one of my favourite poems of yours so far :) again - the repetition of the last lines really well, and made the ending even more effective :)

Peace. [Sole]

Wow, Amazing Poem. I loved it. The Flow and the Ryhme was great. Good Job.

~Joe~

This is touching. you write so well,how it all flows and the emotion and heart you put into it.

Wow, Kaylee. This poem was very good. Not just because of the great descriptions and wording sense. But also because of how you kept the entire poem the same the whole way through. Your use of only two rhymes in the entire poem makes it magnificent. It does not sound forced or anything. Good job.

-Artimis-

Soon the moonlight shines on the tent
You force to envelope the reminders you own
The treasures that your soul had spent

^love the above lines totally...brilliant poem keep it up...can u do a few of mine too? thanx

Lovely, so beautiful. Emotion is expressed throughout. not once have i failed to enjoy reading a poem by you.
xxxx