She Chases Her Dreams

I like this poem. It's definitely different....for some reason, it seems like you could have added more. To be honest, I have a very vague idea of what you're trying to say...perhaps that's why I feel it's unfinished. The first two lines, they caught my attention though, and it's nice to become engulfed in poems....that doesn't happen often. Anyway, nice write. Maybe you could clarify a little bit?

That is cool. very unique and interesting to read. good meanings and word choice

I loved this one!..it made me think....and the best poems are those kind....very well written also... 5/5!
~*Linz*~

Wow very meaningful writing here. Really brilliant. This really does stand out and made me think.

All the Best
Sondos

The rhyming is good, and the last stanza is definately the best - but again I had to read it through a few times as well. However - there seems to be pretty deep meaning in it :)
Keep it up

Peace. [Sole]