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by TwilightGurly Mar 14, 2006 category : Dark, fantasy / dark, horror
I Thought I could Run Run Away In This Rain When Everything Came Undone And All That Is, Is Pain All Of These Raindrops Hurt Like Hell, Like The Piercing Bullets From Gunshots And Transform Into Human Like Hands, To Choke My Every Last Breath
by Lilninja
Nice its...unexplainable...but really nice..
by Tricia
Its good, just work on the stanza a lil more, i mean like, sperate the sentences and make look more like poem instead of a story