by NightStalker
Thank you for the comment. You are a very good writer and i like this poem a lot. and i know that i can tell you i feel your pain, but it would be a lie because even if something similar happend to me i did not know the connection u and he had...So i hope things get better and keep ur chin up :) |
by ScarletHaze
Alot went into this well done. i'm sorry for your loss 5/5 xxxxx |
by MDS
I am so sorry if this truly did happen to your bf. I know what its like to lose the one you truly love and care about. Please feel free to e-mail me at mds6900@yahoo.com |
Hey thanks for your comment.....I'm REALLY sorry about your bf we have that in common so if you ever want to talk e-mail me...... |
I'm so sorry. =( |
Wow This Poem Really Touched Me, One Of My Friend's Brother Got Shot Recently Just Because He Wasn't From The Same Neighborhood As Them! Its Horrible...I Love Poems I Can Relate To 5/5 xoxo-Nikki-xoxo |
by edy
Hey sarah enjoyed your poem! Ill write something similiar maybe sometime next week! like a part 2 or something like that..maybe your bf in heaven or something like that! well, umm thanks for the comment!!! |
by loosk
This poem nearly got me crying goo work nd thanx 4 the comment lv 4rm lucyXXXXX |
by mkml
This was really heartbreaking, and a very well-thought and wonderful poem. Most def 5/5. |
by Poetvoices
A lot of people can realte! Good poem, |
by Brandi
Your poems are really good. You are a really good writer. Take care too...... |
by Danielle
Wow i love your poem!! it kindof relates to me.. because 2 of my loved friends died.. and i still cant get over them!! but that is just what suicide can do to you.....it overpowers your life... but keep it up... -danielle |
by Heather
Iam so sry! hope ur doing ok though! |
by Laura Ash
Aw that's so sad.. 5/5 |
That is so sad but i liked it your poems are all great |
by David
Again, great poem... 5/5 |
by {get*lost}
Sorry i havent commented in a while... |
by Krissy
Aww thats sad...but great poem... |