Oh wow, very powerful poem in the essence of how you tell how you feel but how she doesn't feel the same way & how ur waiting to see tears from her too, very well written, keep up the gd work!
-Jenna xo

Wow!! I can picture this in my mind, and it is so sad, but it is completely amazing. I love your work.

So sad and beautiful at the same time! Great job!

Damn, Man you have some talent great poem. And I know how you feel. :-) keep up the good work.

nick