Whole, two paths, seperate.

by Sean   Mar 14, 2006


Met each other on a path to dreamlands,
Burnt, torched and tarnished, but together,
We formed, together and loving. One..
Path split! You saw a fading flame,
I saw a mirror.

The path we were on grew cold,
Hand I held became colder still,
Saw ahead of me warmth, ignored the present,
You shivered.

Memory lane, we’re at a place,
We promised forever to one another here,
We sit, we lay, we kiss, and we’re one….
You cracked my mirror, I saw the flame,
The sparks half-gone, while you tell me
Your cold, you want to go.
I still look, “we’ll be together forever wont we?”
You see my eyes; for once they’re blocked to you.

Falling to pieces,
Coming together,
Family? Your family.
Your path, I don’t have a family,
I try to travel your path, but we’re not one,
We are two, my other half?
I am in two.

How long till we crumble?
This isn’t a love song anymore,
I believed in a forever,
I’ll remember the mirror,
When you’re a part,
Of somebody else’s path.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    Complicating * for some people, sorry

  • 18 years ago

    by Lovely Bones

    I think the poems that are written the quickest are straight the heart, because are really feeling them and the words are basically already there. If you're not feeling them then you struggle to find the words and they don't come out right. That's why poems from the heart are best, especially when they are 'unstructured' lol. Well, thats my point of view anyways.

    Hi, my name is Sarah-Joy, and I love this poem =P So simple yet you go back and forth in ambivalence, which is complicting for some people, but you do it so beautifully =)
    Keep on writing!
    Take Care and God Bless

  • 18 years ago

    by Sean

    Most poems take me 5 minutes or so to write...

    That's why you'll notice they're unstructured..

  • 18 years ago

    by Marjan

    GREAT! you have a way with words sean. I liked the way you poured your thoughts on
    Paper. Ahem…I mean in the computer. Really liked it
    especially the first and last stanza. One can really feel
    what you’re saying. How long did it take you to write it?

    May you be happy,
    marjan

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