Distraction and Destruction

by Poetvoices   Mar 14, 2006


I miss the smile that used to grace your face
when you really meant it.
I miss your warm presence and love for others
and I've tried to hint it.

Recently, without her,
we talked like no tomorrow.
Now, she's back and you hang your head.
I can see your sorrow.

She made you quit the things you love.
She's choosing your career.
She's distancing you from the ones you love.
I'm young, but lend me your ear.

I know you won't leave her.
I just want you to see what I do
and be aware that this girl
doesn't care for you like we do.

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  • 18 years ago

    by RadianceInReverse

    Wooo like all the other poems of yours that ive read..I love this poem...very good girlie..thanks for the love on my poems..Love ya girl..Jocy

  • 18 years ago

    by Ruthie

    *rolls eyes* I don't like ppl who just read and take and then don't give anything back *shakes head* it's mean and RUDE. I think.... but... I thought is was an awesome poem kris! I liked the rythem... it wasn't too fast... and it's simple feel! good on ya huny *hugs* catch ya round!

  • 18 years ago

    by Jacob Perry

    I like it :)
    alhough it isnt exactly a happy sounding one i think it has alot of emotion and a strong message i like it lots ^^ 5/5 dont know why no one else commented it

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