Just another suicide

by alyshaa   Mar 14, 2006


She goes into the bathroom
in her hand is a knife
tears in her eyes
ready to end her own life
the shine of the blade
reflects the light
her tortured screams
fade into the night
she slits both her wrists
falls to the floor
death is all around her
she will soon be no more
no one will miss her
nobody cared
they all just acted like
she wasn't even there
if just one person had of noticed
if she'd had just on friend
if someone had loved her
her life wouldn't have to end
she can hear raindrops on the window
as she lay covered in blood
soon she'll be painless
and buried 6 feet in the mud
she just lay waiting
till she finally dies
her life comes to an end
at 1:35
when they finally find her
in the bathroom where they now stand
she's lying there lifeless
knife still in her hand
right there beside her
was a neatly written note
they opened it up
ans heres what the girl wrote
"mommy i love you
i just couldn't take this pain
i had nothing left to lose
and nothing at all to gain"
"tell my brothers that i loved them
tell them not to cry
tell them to remember
always keep your head held high"
"daddy i love you
you were my world
and even though I'm in heaven now
I'm still your baby girl"
a week later at the funeral
her family came to say good bye
and they buried her body
tears filled everyones eyes
then at that very moment
as they looked up in the sky
they saw her spirit flying free
and they all dried their eyes
she'd been excepted into heaven
there was no reason left to cry
because even though she was gone
they now had an angel by their side

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  • 18 years ago

    by imnotlikethem

    That was SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO good.........it made me cry inside cuz I never cry on the outside.....that's just me...........you definently have a blessing with writing and getting into people's hearts with the emotion in your writing.............keep it up............e-mail me sometime........

    xoxo
    Cassie

  • 18 years ago

    by Brittany

    THat was deep, it made me cry.....I never cry