Suicide Card (Collab with Juls)

by The Wingless   Mar 14, 2006


The moon's in the night sky
Wind gently speaks its sigh
I'll forever wait the day
If I cry, will you stay?

Nightingales will pray
Soon we end our delay
As nature sings this song
One that will never be portrayed

Finally, opened eyes
Seek truth in a world of lies
It's pounding in my chest
I thought it knew what was best

My heart left me along with you
Left me beat and abused
Wind creeps a lonesome tone
All alone I lie in my room

So, I'll stab the knife
End this horrible life
I'll pull the trigger hard
This was my suicide card
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I'm not suicidal..

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  • 18 years ago

    by swEEt jEzz

    Its very good but kinda scary..scared me 4 a min..

  • 18 years ago

    by PURE HEART

    Hey that was so sad........nice use of words....5/5

    luv,
    Bharti

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    **effect
    darn i always do that!!

  • 18 years ago

    by Torn

    Yeh this was great. I loved the use of words..more cryptic than usual, that gave it an awesome affect.
    Well done to you and juls:P
    And im glad you're not suicidal..lol..thoought id just pitch that in:P
    xoxo

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    *Is Offically Jealous of you and Juls*

    Damn! May I say I hate you two? Wonderfully done, I'm amazed at you, really most Collabs I've read you can see that difinative line between parts, how ever you're is very covhesive (sp?) I've very proud of you and Juls, haha will there be another to follow? *crosses fingers*

    Love yeh
    Jenn

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