Best suicide note I have ever read! (psst never read real ones *thanks god* though lost a friend suicide.. bla bla long story, save that for another time... psst commend continues;) No really, read a lot of these kind of poems when you are in the "sad poems - section" haha, but none of em is as good as this one... LOVED IT.. Briljant =)

Lotsaaaaaaaaaa love!!!
-xxxx-

*shocked* You...you have the same poem as me. Oh wait thats right we have so much skill that we wrote one together! *shakes hands with Mike* Good job on the poem, I am pleased with the outcome of it : )
I had fun working on it with you, even though I had no clue what I was doing!

*Juls*

*Is Offically Jealous of you and Juls*

Damn! May I say I hate you two? Wonderfully done, I'm amazed at you, really most Collabs I've read you can see that difinative line between parts, how ever you're is very covhesive (sp?) I've very proud of you and Juls, haha will there be another to follow? *crosses fingers*

Love yeh
Jenn

Yeh this was great. I loved the use of words..more cryptic than usual, that gave it an awesome affect.
Well done to you and juls:P
And im glad you're not suicidal..lol..thoought id just pitch that in:P
xoxo

**effect
darn i always do that!!

Hey that was so sad........nice use of words....5/5

luv,
Bharti

Its very good but kinda scary..scared me 4 a min..