Suicide Card(collab with The Wingless)

by Juls   Mar 14, 2006


The moon's in the night sky
Wind gently speaks its sigh
I'll forever wait the day
If I cry, will you stay?

Nightingales will pray
Soon we end our delay
As nature sings this song
One that will never be protrayed

Finally, opened eyes
Seek truth in a world of lies
It's pounding in my chest
I thought it knew what was best

My heart left me along with you
Left me beat and abused
Wind creeps a lonesome tone
All alone I lie in my room

So, I'll stab the knife
End this horrible life
I'll pull the trigger hard
This was my suicide card

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  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    This is really good. I really liked it! I loved the last stanza! Keep up the good work =]

    luv natz x0x

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Hey Sexxy Muffin,

    I read this on Mike's file as well, but I thought I should come comment here as well! Damn I really hate you two, both very very talented, Honestly hun well done ^_^ *is Jealous* I really hope this isn't the last we here from the pair of you. keep it up =) I love you hubbster

    Jenn

  • 18 years ago

    by Mona

    Oo Mike added it aswell, so I just read it.. It's amazing ghehe. Really loved it. Better then any other suicide notes/cards/whatever I have read on this site. Well done =)

    Lotsaaaaaaa love
    -xxx-

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    Awesome poem Julie.

    You have great talent!

    Lol.

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