How i love thee

by Allisha Fox   Mar 14, 2006


Tom
how i love thee.
let me count the ways.

To view thee
is to look upon an angel
fallen out of heaven.

To touch thee
is like touching
the most loviest thing on earth.

To hearth thee
is to hearth the
swwet melody of love.

To smell thy scent
is to smell thee
sweet scent a hundred miles away.

To taste thee
lips upon mine
is like tasting forbidden wine.

Tom
how i love thee.

please give me some tips on this one cuz i dont think that is is very good and would like to make it better.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jon

    If you want to make it better maybe you should do it about some one that you actually love and then the words will just pour out

  • 18 years ago

    by Jon

    Write what you write you might hurt someone feelings