I think thats its good. but i really dont understand it. it might be because im tired. but its cool.

Wow, that's awsome! I wish that I could write like that, but whenever I try to rhyme, it sounds cheesy. You have extraordinary talent. Good Job.

This poem reflects a lot about life.
It seriously made me think - I was very impressed
=]

I'm going to go a different route than other people. I think you could have broken this up every four lines. I didn't really get it at first but maybe it's more of an open meaning one. The words were good but it could have been organized better. Keep writing, though.

I agree wit kaylee, the words could be organised better but overall very good poem
it made me think lol
anyways a deserved 5/5

~StefQ

I think that you wrecked this poem by using all of the big words. I know by saying that it makes me sound a bit lame grammar wise, but it looks like you flipped through the dictionary looking for more enticing words.

In diong so, I read this poem and instantly thought that you were trying to please the reader in using intelligent words, but it seriously looks like you have no idea what the words mean and just spotted them out in a dictionary or thesaurus.

Omg that was awsome...i loved the way u made that flow...and great use of words.some parts were hard to understand..but thats only cause im not that edgucated...keep it up
take care,
david

That was really great it flowed perfectly and the rhyme was very effective well done xx ALLY xx