I thought this poem was really good but I do think you could have broken the last paragraph up some more. Those two really long lines kind of take something away from it. 4/5

I just the same way. I miss the girl. :( but good stuff!

Was a pretty good poem better then some of the others....again nothing stood out but I could feel your emotion in this piece which is good.

~retniapdoolb~

Great 0ne!! l0ved it.... rate it a 5/5! keep up the g00d w0rk and keep writing!

Great poem, dont no som people do it, ya out did mine, and maybe i might try do a poem bout som1 like ya said.