Fantastic poem def another 5/5 take care hun sarah.

Ya awsome poem and keep it up never let that blade take over you it can cause more harm than what you think

Wow dark, loved it hahaha :D 5/5 good job :P oh and thanks for commenting on my poem its nice to hear what people have to say about my stuff its greatly appreciated :D... bye darling :)

Jennifer, I am an English teacher at a small school in AR. One of my students showed me your poem, and I thought it was really good!! You definantly have a future in writing. I sympathize with your hard times or difficult life. It does get better and life is really worth living. Good job on the poems!! Keep it up!!!! Susie Smith