Its all because of you...

by Fallen~Tears   Mar 15, 2006


Slice slice slice,
thats the sound of the knife
its time for me to pay the ultimate price

red red red
thats what pours from my vein
soon enough i will be forgotten like tears in the rain

Tug Tug Tug
thats the sound of the rope
now you know I'm giving up hope

Tears Tears Tears
thats what rolls down my cheeks
i haven't been able to get you off my mind for weeks

Crash Crash Crash
as i fall to the floor
its all because of you, my heart you tore

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  • 18 years ago

    by The Angel of Secrets

    Very emotional, I really liked it

  • 18 years ago

    by Jessica

    Wow! that was so powerfull! i loved how you repeated those words at the beggining of each stanza! keep it up!
    jessy xox

  • 18 years ago

    by Natalie

    Another sad peice. Well dont though. I liked how you repeated those few words. Another awesome job! Keep it up *hugs*

    `taleee xx

  • 18 years ago

    by Momentary Relapse

    It was good. The flow was great yet the beginning wasn't really that good but it did tie in.
    ~S3I

  • 18 years ago

    by Ashlick

    Omg this has to be my favorite poem of yours so far!
    i absolutly love it

    ashlick(ashley)

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